Rough cut feedback

After previewing my rough cut to my peers I asked for their feedback and ways they thought I could improve.

Lydia

• Flashbacks really good, quite cheesy but works well with the song
• Good narrative throughout
• Focus individually on animatic parts
• The 'Ill be there' sign goes on a little too long, maybe break it up if possible

Kieran

• Nice changes in pace, when music slows down, so does footage
• Consistent reference to map
• Crying shot works well with transitions
• Liked the playing up to the camera elements and waving part towards the end
• Nice start, suits genre and song

I found this feedback beneficial and helpful and I will try to apply this to my final cut.